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Gary Blankenship
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Posted on Monday, March 06, 2006 - 5:53 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Verses Found in Dickens’ Pages XIX - Estates

“…the lords of the State...”
--Charles Dickens, Tale of Two Cities

pass laws
and pontificate on the state
of those they pretend to represent

each estate
manipulates to stand above
the other aristocrats and common masses

the 4th Estate
speculates about conditions
they have no way to appreciate

from the church
desire to achieve majesty
their charges expected to procreate

and I
I can only speculate
at what the future will create

and how little
of it I appreciate

*
summer 2006
in America
(those parts below the 48th parallel
and north of the Rio Grande)
will be lemonade
concerts at the bandstand
Sunday drives
picnics in the park
weddings on the lawn

summer 2006
will be elections
between two men
who might be twins
for an office, deck
and private dining room
(and the occasional woman
who is considered safe)
60 hour weeks
vacations shortened by a call
from the boss or a client

summer 2006
will be warmer days
unpredictable gas prices
body bags
and decisions on a woman’s choice
passed down by the best appointments
a father and a son ever made

summer 2006
in America
will be forgotten
when the bill comes due
in the summer of 2007

*
the lords of state
regurgitate
what they do now
they should have done
or will do in the future

as we sip lemonade
and vegetate


(Message edited by garyb on March 07, 2006)
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Allen Itz
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Posted on Monday, March 06, 2006 - 6:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

the most literate rant I think I've ever read. rage done up in doilies. well done.

allen
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sue kay
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Posted on Tuesday, March 07, 2006 - 3:58 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

We will always make lemonade, best use to made of lemmons. Dark, and foreboding, but still ranting against ruin is what keeps us in the game. I was reminded of this:

Ashmolean acquires dickhead platter

An Oxford museum has paid 240,000 pounds for a Renaissance plate which shows a male head made up entirely of phalluses.
The Italian plate is thought to have been made by ceramicist Francesco Urbini in the 16th century. It shows a head made up of around 50 fleshy penises, wrapped round each other to form a dense, knotted whole.

The head is framed by a garland carrying the inscription: "Ogni homo me guarda come fosse una testa de cazi" (Every man looks at me as if I were a dickhead).

Which I remember reading a while ago. Now how can a renaissance artist reach out and touch a modern man? Well, everytime I think about the impulse behind this creation, I laugh out loud.

Sue

Karen L Monahan
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Posted on Tuesday, March 07, 2006 - 11:12 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Ironic. Stronge. Powerful poetry.. my favorite kind.

Well done Gary-- I could hear a slam poet reciting that first one!! Love the rhythms throughout.

(((smile)))
Karen
Gary Blankenship
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Posted on Tuesday, March 07, 2006 - 1:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Thanks for the kind words. A word in the last S was used incorrectly, forcing me to find a better choice.

Smiles.

Gary

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Kathy Paupore
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Posted on Tuesday, March 07, 2006 - 7:21 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Gary, keep 'em coming. The series I mean.

:-) K
Gary Blankenship
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Posted on Tuesday, March 07, 2006 - 7:24 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Kathy, grins. Actually only 2 more to write and to 3 to post for there the paragraph ends.

Thanks and smiles.

Gary


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~M~
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Posted on Tuesday, March 07, 2006 - 8:16 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

I will not comment on the politics, Mr. B. I will just say that I loved your use of -ate words. They really kept the rhythm flowing in the first and last parts. I kept wondering what -ate word was going to come next!

Andrew Dufresne
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Posted on Wednesday, March 08, 2006 - 7:37 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Good work here. A fine read.

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Gary Blankenship
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Posted on Wednesday, March 08, 2006 - 7:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Thanks very much.

Smiles.

Gary


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LJ Cohen
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Posted on Wednesday, March 08, 2006 - 4:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Well done, Gary! A finely honed rant that does not leave poetics at the door. *bow*

best,
ljc
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Gary Blankenship
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Posted on Wednesday, March 08, 2006 - 7:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Lisa, thanks.

Gary


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Laurie Byro
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Posted on Wednesday, March 15, 2006 - 9:59 am:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

excellent Gary
way to go and I dunno
seems like a different voice for you, and one I like

peace
laurie

Gary Blankenship
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Posted on Sunday, March 19, 2006 - 2:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post View Post/Check IP Print Post

Thank very much.

Gary
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